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Hermione's Talent part 2 Chapters 13-27

szaleniec1000 Jul 24, 2012 13:37

In which they all live happily ever after. Or shag, at any rate.

( The final chapters )

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Hermione's Talent part 2 Chapters 5-12

szaleniec1000 Jul 23, 2012 04:38

In which Ron is laid to rest amid anachronistic music and ALLCAPS. Welcome back to Hermione's Talent.

( Chapters 5-12 )

epic fail, please recycle where facilities exist, department of redundancy department, draco trilogy wants him back, anvil of foreshadowing, pov!fail, reading the books is a good idea, are you a witch or not, mc neville in da house, pointless wittering, badfic:hermione's talent, puppy-punting patrol, allcaps of doom, mione my arse, hermione in name only, totally radical, markov chain, what were the betas doing, madam malkin's mugglewear, disembodied dialogue, harry potter, convention of the psychics, screw karma, dialogue is not narration, exact eavesdropping, continuity isn't optional, approved hogwarts exposed dialogue voice, it's full of filler

Hemione's Talent Chapters 15-20

szaleniec1000 Jul 10, 2012 00:25

It's about this point that the story goes completely off the deep end and keeps on going.

( And going. )

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Hemione's Talent Chapters 9-14

szaleniec1000 Jul 09, 2012 01:13

Now with a TVTropes page. Contains spoilers, if it's possible to "spoil" such a load of crap.

( It continues )

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Hemione's Talent Chapters 3-8

szaleniec1000 Jul 06, 2012 17:59

Chapter 3 appears to have been phoned in, possibly on Enoby's black mobile. There's no cod psychoanalysis or overwrought drama, just incredibly bland descriptions of the Hogwarts student body rocking out to Hermione's next musical number. Which song, I hear you ask?
( I think Tara Gilesbie co-authored this bit )

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